Sunday, February 22, 2015

Q2 Wilson Essay (revised)

We always know bad people to be the ones who lie, cheat, and steal. The good people are the ones who   look out for each other, who are kind and caring. However in today’s society as well as in human beings in general, it is impossible to be categorized as good or bad. Doctor’s push drugs to get money, politicians lie to make money and get power, and even parents and teachers make bad decisions that harm the children they should be taking care of. This does not mean that there aren’t any doctors who want to save lives regardless of their paycheck, or politicians who want to change the world for the better, or even teachers and parents who want to educate, care, and propel future generations forward. It simply means that there are shades of grey between the black and white walls we all see so clearly, and it is our duty to look for them and determine the morality of their cause. In these passages written by scientist Edward O. Wilson. Wilson tries to manipulate the reader into believing  that environmentalists or conservationists have a hidden agenda and are ultimately just shoving it down our throats in order to benefit themselves as well as the economy. Edward O. Wilson conveys his beliefs thorough use of diction, syntax, as well as ethos.
In Wilson’s first paragraph he already illustrates his feelings towards environmentalists through use of diction. “The wackos have a broad and mostly hidden agenda that always comes from the left.” Throughout the entire passage he chooses specific words such as “wackos” or “hypocrites” or even “beaurocrats” when referring to the environmentalists in order to push his main point: that these people have their own agenda and are really pushing an unproductive discussion down peoples throats in order to sway them politically. By using these words to describe the environmentalists he is using over the top diction as well as  character assassination and painting a picture of these people that is ugly and negative to sway the reader into believing that this is the reality of who these people are.
             Throughout this passage Edward O. Wilson also uses syntax by asking questions and then answering them himself. For example, “what exactly are they trying to conserve?”, to point out the question, followed by , “their own selfish interests, for sure, not the natural environment,” in order to answer the question and instill beliefs in his readers heads. Another example is when he says :how to get power? Is what theyre thinking.” By structuring his sentences in a way in which he asks a controversial question and then provides the answer with his own personal opinions, he does not allow the reader to fully think for themselves, especially if they are not educated on this particular topic, thus causing them to be persuaded into agreeing with Wilson’s main points.
            Edward O. Wilson also understands that it is in most of human’s nature to fight what is wrong and stand by what is right. In knowing this, he employs a strong use of ethos to show how conservationists or environmentalists are unethical people. This is a tactic he employs in almost every sentence. “They keep their right wing political agenda hidden when downgrading climate change and species extinction, but for them economic growth is always the ultimate, and maybe the only goal.” He emphasizes in every sentence the ethics and the morality of what environmentalists are actually doing and what they truly believe in. Here Wilson understands that every human being longs for a revolution whether they know it or not, by pointing out the ways in which the environmentalists are wronging the general public through lies, he sparks that place within every reader that wishes to fight for what is right, tempting them to stay focused and listen to what he has to say.
            It is clear that Edward O. Wilson is not a fan of environmentalists and believes the topic to be unproductive. He conveys that through his satire by using many rhetorical devices such as diction, syntax, and ethos. Though many would not agree with what he is saying, the truth is that we need people to question the morality of causes. If they don’t we would live in a highly unjust world. There have always been people, the most obvious being politicians, who have covered up their bad intentions with good ones, therefore it is important to question things, and have a voice, not one that is given to you through articles, teachers or parents, but one that is truly your own and is able to convey your beliefs to the world.



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